i like to write but I'm anxious to post online.

Question

i like to write but I'm anxious to post online, could anyone read and review my story and give me an unbiased opinion whether or not they find it to be capturing?

PJ4 · Answer

yes

LonerandDown · Answer

@PJ4 any other socials you have so I can send there? my story would exceed the word limit here

PJ4 · Answer

tele

LonerandDown · Answer

@PJ4 what to search you by?

LonerandDown · Answer

ookay imma search

shivang · Answer

ok

LonerandDown · Answer

@Pj4 can't find yo tele

LonerandDown · Answer

@shivang how to send you?

LonerandDown · Answer

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Zku_lfYlhTmVa3NEdLbTtMevOpucrjMzkpWvEaKOKpA/edit?usp=drivesdk

LonerandDown · Answer

just read from here and tell

shivang · Answer

ok 👌

shivang · Answer

ok, it has good opening, if you ask me. The problem is with font format

shivang · Answer

you need better font, and more better format presentation

shivang · Answer

read about typography

LonerandDown · Answer

i meant the writing. how do you find my writing?

shivang · Answer

well for me it's pretty smooth

shivang · Answer

in short I like the opening

LonerandDown · Answer

i see

shivang · Answer

Is this only peace you hav

shivang · Answer

*have*

LonerandDown · Answer

i have a few others but i plan on commercializing this one rn

shivang · Answer

can you share them?

LonerandDown · Answer

will do

skylar · Answer

u can try some apps like wattpad, inkitt etc  .. and upload ur stories under a anonymous name... just a suggestion.

shivang · Answer

there so many websites like Wattpad

Recovering_babe · Answer

you know you can do stuff in real life without posting it.....?!

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